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echoed_spirit

echoed_spirit

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Here I am again,
drowned in pools of fire,
I can smell the heat from here
inside the corners of my room,
under daylight’s gleam, midnight’s
solar flare
blinded by the star’s glare,
they say goodnight

i come undone, flying under her radar
flying under the stars gaze,
have I disappeared completely?
or have I been clinging to the poles of the earth too long?
do I freeze or do I burn
how long must I yearn for decay
for anything better than this,

I think of life when I think of death
I think of how I will always be more pure than her
and it puts a smirk on my face,
as I sit in agony of my dungeon

I have cursed myself
I did this on purpose years ago
i did it to save a girl i knew
and saved her, I did
she went on to do greater things
so as i realize this, the sun reaches higher into the sky


how great it is to be pure
do they lie in bed together
is she chained to her forever
as I am chained to my loneliness
and my resilience of forgiveness
 
Care to give some back story to what inspired this little piece? I'm assuming you wrote it.
 
Like rain drops falling into a pool of water, you entered my heart.
Causing ripples in my heart, spreading out into my soul and being.
Like the ripples you faint away until there was stillness, but like the rain drop has added it's part to the pool you have added to your being to my heart and soul.
 
echoed_spirit said:
Just life experiences and heart ache of recent events
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if i may Elle id like to share mine with you...

Thoughts of you trickle through my mind as the tears leak and drip down my face.
I dare not wipe them away as they are on a mission of emotional release.
Each tear is a memory, good or bad, they flow in the same way.
As they drip off my face i try to catch them to hold onto the thought for just a little longer.
Your image is imprinted in my mind like a scar on my skin, with me always.
My heart has been shaped by the love you shared with me.
To know that you loved me and that i will always love you, brings me peace.
 
I am the ghostly figure, that catches your eye when you look in the mirror.
I am the still air you breathe when you gasp in shock.
I am feeling of sorrow when you look back upon your life.
I am the shiver down your spine when you pass a familiar figure in the street.

I am still here to be seen.
I am the breath of life to those that need it.
I am the happiness i deserve.
I am the figure that lifts peoples souls in time of sorrow.

You can live your life in regret.
I can live my life of clear mind.
The things you you have lost will haunt your mind.
The things i have gained will be treasured in mine..
I AM ALIVE.
 
Your Hand of Friendship has helped me be here today.
Your Hand of Friendship stretched out and clasped me tight.
Your Hand of Friendship felt soft and strong as it held on.
Your Hand of Friendhip stayed with me till i was ready to pull myself to the light.
Your Hand of Friendship i realised was the belief in me.
And now my Hand of Friendship will never let go.
 
As I look to you my love, your love touches my heart like the warm rays from the sun.
You left me once and my heart was filled with a bitter winter chill.
But like the slivers of light breaking through the clouds, You shone your light on me once more.
Your love is the weather of my heart and soul.
I will happily take the rain and the cold, because i know you will warm me with your loving embrace.
 
nby323 said:
if i may Elle id like to share mine with you...

Thoughts of you trickle through my mind as the tears leak and drip down my face.
I dare not wipe them away as they are on a mission of emotional release.
Each tear is a memory, good or bad, they flow in the same way.
As they drip off my face i try to catch them to hold onto the thought for just a little longer.
Your image is imprinted in my mind like a scar on my skin, with me always.
My heart has been shaped by the love you shared with me.
To know that you loved me and that i will always love you, brings me peace.
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nby323 said:
if i may Elle id like to share mine with you...

Thoughts of you trickle through my mind as the tears leak and drip down my face.
I dare not wipe them away as they are on a mission of emotional release.
Each tear is a memory, good or bad, they flow in the same way.
As they drip off my face i try to catch them to hold onto the thought for just a little longer.
Your image is imprinted in my mind like a scar on my skin, with me always.
My heart has been shaped by the love you shared with me.
To know that you loved me and that i will always love you, brings me peace.
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Such a good poem, it has meaning and heart please bring more :)
 
Here's an old poem for when the 11th Doctor left.
Oh Doctor how I will miss your silly run.
Your chin.
Your whackiness.
And how you made us laugh and cry.
But mostly your style wearing your fez and bowtie.
Fez's are cool you once said....I know i have one on my head.
But go with a light and laughter....Hello 12th....let the timey wimey stuff begin again.
 
To be there for everyone,
I am happy to be there,
A shoulder to cry on,
To lift your spirits with a smile.

To be the shoulder of the one i crave for,
To mop up my tears,
The smile to lift my spirits,
With your smile.

For someone to be there when i'm alone,
Is my one true goal,
But my spirits are low,
My search goes on.
 
In the winter of love life is mellowed, serene
Brightened softly by memories warm glow
as you bask in the riches of joys you've both shared
since the springtime of love long ago
 
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