Poetry

May the everlasting hues of the sun
be as warm as the heat that flows your heart.

May the heart be concealed in its protective casing, so that I'd be the only one who has it's key.

May the key never be lost from my grasp, for there'd be no one more worth to love you so than the one who has been chosen by call of thy soul..
 
echoed_spirit said:
My lame attempt of poetry comes from a loving heart unloved and a over active mind. But yes we all have those dark thoughts of inspiration
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Hey, I just read your poems, and they touched me deeply as I am trying to heal from a broken heart, I must admit, without much luck. I could never find the words to describe how I feel as beautifully as you have. Please never refer to your poetry as a "lame attempt", your poems are very touching and personal, and it looks like you inspired others to share their work. Looking forward to reading more of your work, xx
 
You are a soil that embraces the winds of life, touching, feeling, taping into its all knowing desires. Let it wrap round you, breath in its raw emotion and release with a new essence from your soul
 
echoed_spirit said:
Here I am again,
drowned in pools of fire,
I can smell the heat from here
inside the corners of my room,
under daylight’s gleam, midnight’s
solar flare
blinded by the star’s glare,
they say goodnight

i come undone, flying under her radar
flying under the stars gaze,
have I disappeared completely?
or have I been clinging to the poles of the earth too long?
do I freeze or do I burn
how long must I yearn for decay
for anything better than this,

I think of life when I think of death
I think of how I will always be more pure than her
and it puts a smirk on my face,
as I sit in agony of my dungeon

I have cursed myself
I did this on purpose years ago
i did it to save a girl i knew
and saved her, I did
she went on to do greater things
so as i realize this, the sun reaches higher into the sky


how great it is to be pure
do they lie in bed together
is she chained to her forever
as I am chained to my loneliness
and my resilience of forgiveness
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Dude... Nice.
 
Am I the wind that blows through your hair and you not notice my cooling breathe.
Am I the heat from the sun that warms your soul, and you not notice my heat.
Am I the early spring flower that makes you smile knowing spring is here, or am I that flower hidden by the grass.
I can be all these things if only you could see my beauty.
 
Sitting alone in the dark
I realize it was all for naught
Your affections too late hit their mark
Sitting here alone I am distraught.

Why did I ignore it before?
In my stubbornness I brought you pain
I don't want this for myself anymore
I still fall into old habits to my disdain
 
Memories are painful
Memories are a human trait
My actions were shameful
To be reminded is fate

As I drink, I drink to forget
I know that you deserved better
That night is a memory in my head forever set
I know she'd still be here had I not met her

I still remember that night years ago
The night you were gone in my stead
It should've been me, but oh no
I then held you in my arms as you bled

Are memories all bad?
Sometimes I think so
But in the end they don't all make me sad
They are a lesson to be learned from, I know.

None of it matters in the end, I suppose
Im just another creature whose happiness I sometimes must feign
So to whoever reads this poem of woe
Do not make my mistakes, lest you feel my pain.
 
InvincibleLight said:
Memories are painful
Memories are a human trait
My actions were shameful
To be reminded is fate

As I drink, I drink to forget
I know that you deserved better
That night is a memory in my head forever set
I know she'd still be here had I not met her

I still remember that night years ago
The night you were gone in my stead
It should've been me, but oh no
I then held you in my arms as you bled

Are memories all bad?
Sometimes I think so
But in the end they don't all make me sad
They are a lesson to be learned from, I know.

None of it matters in the end, I suppose
Im just another creature whose happiness I sometimes must feign
So to whoever reads this poem of woe
Do not make my mistakes, lest you feel my pain.
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Hey Light, when did you write this. You know it touches me. I use to write some poems ,seem like a life time ago, I just don't think it is there anymore. You keep writing and keep sharing .
 
Needgekopriz said:
Hey Light, when did you write this. You know it touches me. I use to write some poems ,seem like a life time ago, I just don't think it is there anymore. You keep writing and keep sharing .
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As I was posting it here. I write on the fly, mostly.
 
echoed_spirit said:
Like rain drops falling into a pool of water, you entered my heart.
Causing ripples in my heart, spreading out into my soul and being.
Like the ripples you faint away until there was stillness, but like the rain drop has added it's part to the pool you have added to your being to my heart and soul.
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Beautiful heart touching words
 
"You started a fire in her soul
But tomorrow came,
And you left her shiverng in the cold
So she gathered what little embers left of her,
As she carefully wispered love to her dieing self,
Now she's a burning forest, as bright as the sun
And all you can do is look at her with awe,
For you'd never imagined that a girl
Looking so fragile and naive,
Would one day become a fire
That you could never ever put out.
 
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